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this letter that im writing you
read it carefully
and all the way through
im letting you know
my feelings are true
my feelings have consumed me
its too late
you have to chose
who has your heart
knowing is truth
this letter im writing you
was written with the last few drops...
of my blood
©2008-2009 ~3penguinSlippers
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:iconcausticfx:
"Melancholy is the pleasure of being sad."
-Victor Hugo
:iconthisestmoi:
Uhmn...-cough- The consept is great -nodnod- Keep workin on that one...-cough- But how come it just stops rhyming after the first four lines? I really liked the rhyme!

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In this space below my comment, I should think of something to say...Something witty, yet funny! Something that makes people say 'I wish I had thought of that!'

But I guess I'm just not that kind of person...So I'll write this...
:iconfoto-bellezza:
very nicely done chiko-sama.

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